I don't know if you were really looking for pictoral critiques or not, probably not, however I did notice that her head seemed a little small compared to the actual picture, which makes yours lose a little in depth. Like she's not leaning out as far or something. Now I'm not sure how close you were trying to be to realistic or if you were just adding in your normal flair for bigger bodies with smaller heads. Either way, it is still a nice picture.
wow. i'm always amazed at how people (especialy the ones who have no concept of an actual female body) can be. and i am amazed that i am still amazed considering that people never fail to prove their ignorance. but that's a different subject for a different time.
awesome work. i think you should experiment more with this. and that is my opinnion.
I'm just laughing at all the idiots who are flaming this when it clearly states in the description that this is a PRACTICE piece. It's not the end of the world to want to better yourself Jollyjack, thank you for your art and fuck the nay-sayers.
great job on both pose and cleavage... as per usual but.... were you thinking of one of the Kardashians when you were drawing the face???? she seems to be even raising an eyebrow back at you... imagine if a Disney princess looked like this, though???? (wicked grinz)
I think if you added a touch of highlight to her nose (see reference photo) it would look more 3d and less flat and pointy and big. But I know your style has a different treatment of noses. Just something I noticed.
THATS A HUMAN!? YOU SICK BARSTAD! I BET HUMAN WOMEN TURN YOU ON DON'T THEY? DON'T THEY!!! ??? I BET IF I HELD A FEMALE MODEL TO YOU, YOU'D WANT TO DRAW IT ALL SEXY-FIED HUH?! YOU SICK TWISTED SOULESS DENIZEN!