Fantastic experimentation with the texture of the dresses form, although I cant help thinking 'bacon?" when I look at it at a glance lol. Other than that, I love the flow and curve of the form, the sketchy harshness contrasted with the clean lines. Very nice, Jack.
I like your solid style, do you photoshop it and clean it up with all the shading like that? or do you leave it as is? I'm trying to start my own comic up and I could use the advice of people who have experience. If you have any other tips please do tell.
btw I love the way you render dimension, very true to the camera angle.